

Rural Hell to Urban Hell Before you can understand where I was going or even why I was going you have to understand where I started I left from. I was living in outside of Elsinore, Ontario. A community of the whitest hick folk you have ever seen. Honestly most people driving though wouldnt realize it was even a community to begin with; it just looks likes about a dozen houses along the side of the road. According to the legal documents in the Owen Sound (which is a sprawling metropolis in comparison to Elsinore) it shouldnt even exist anymore. It was formed around a bubble of land in the Chippewa Native reserve granted to the soldier who wrote the poem &Rural Hell to Urban Hell by ~NorthNightwatchmanJR


Screen Play Scene 1. SPOKANE FALLS MIDDAYScreen Play Scene by ~NorthNightwatchmanJR
VICTOR and THOMAS stand next to the falls holding each holding a BOX OF ASHES. A THIN RUSTY RAIL stands between them and the falls below. NATIVE DRUMMING MUSIC plays softly in the background. The two of them talk about VICTORS FATHER.
VICTOR
I still never found out why he left. For all I know
it really was my fault that he left. Ill never know.
THOMAS
It wasnt your fault he left. I dont know why but
I do know that wasnt the reason he left.
VICTOR
I suppose youre right.
Victor walks closer to the railing and dumps his BOX OF ASHES into the water. Off to the


The Truth About The Squids 1? The Truth About The SquidsThe Truth About The Squids 1? by ~NorthNightwatchmanJR
Chapter 1?
From my cockpit view screens I looked out into the endless expanse of sand, the desert that once was New Jersey a major city before General Coops last stand against the Squids 30 years ago. There was not a single sign of life, not even bacteria can survive the irradiated wasteland left here. Even I would not be alive if not for my Combat Apparatus Suit (or CAS as everyone who isnt a tech boy calls it). I always thought that was a stupid name for it. It just does not express the power or carry the weight of a 300 tonnes of fortified steel forged into the shape of the greatest species to e
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~"You are the most beautiful woman I've ever met."
~"I'm flattered you think I'm beautiful. And I'm flattered that you think I'm a woman."
Bisexual is what everyone was before society kicked in.
Friend: May the force be with you.
Me: And also with you.
Okay, possible. XD I definitely sent it. Let me just resend it in case you didn't get it.
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~"You are the most beautiful woman I've ever met."
~"I'm flattered you think I'm beautiful. And I'm flattered that you think I'm a woman."
Bisexual is what everyone was before society kicked in.
Friend: May the force be with you.
Me: And also with you.
You know, we should talk more.
But that's not what I wanted to message you about XD two things:
1)How did the distribution for the comic go?
2)Can you give me a deadline, preferably a weekend, for the next pages, so I'll have proper, solid motivation?
Please and thank you.
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~"You are the most beautiful woman I've ever met."
~"I'm flattered you think I'm beautiful. And I'm flattered that you think I'm a woman."
Bisexual is what everyone was before society kicked in.
Friend: May the force be with you.
Me: And also with you.
I'm away from my main computer for the next month so I won't be able to update the comic even if you provide me with pages but I will have regular internet access for part of next week so if you could have a page by the 23-24 that would be good.
I have the pencil sketch ready. Sorry if I wasn't able to reach the deadline I set, because I still have inking and photoshopping to do. No promises, but it shouldn't take too long now.
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~"You are the most beautiful woman I've ever met."
~"I'm flattered you think I'm beautiful. And I'm flattered that you think I'm a woman."
Bisexual is what everyone was before society kicked in.
Friend: May the force be with you.
Me: And also with you.
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~"You are the most beautiful woman I've ever met."
~"I'm flattered you think I'm beautiful. And I'm flattered that you think I'm a woman."
Bisexual is what everyone was before society kicked in.
Friend: May the force be with you.
Me: And also with you.